M. Wilson

Once again... amazing. You have a well developed writing style. You kept my attention from beggining to end (which isn't tha easy). I love the ending. It keeps you guessing...wanting ...

Well done. I loved the way you started the piece off. I personally think that a beggining paragraph is one of the hardest things to accomplish, because those are the ...

I like that someone actually wrote a story on m favorite avatar character. She's also one of he few villians I actually like, so thank you for this. Anyway... I ...

Interesting... I never really pictured Ed as evil, so this was a nice glimpse. But I am a little confused... is this supposed to be part of the main canon... ...

First i would like to say that, i like twilight, but do not love it-so there shouldn't be too much bias opinions, if none at all. Anway, I like the ...

Ok, so I’m new at this whole crit. thing, but here its goes. First: I think the story is going in a good direction, although confusing at times. By that ...